Rap&Hip-Hop: Rate my first recorded song?

haha, u were SERIOUS about the trying to be a rapper thing?? AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA, i thought u was just trying to be annoying but if u actually took the time out to record it n post it on youtube n ask ths question i guess u were serious. AHAHAHAHAHAHAHA, whitegurl, just give up now, cuz you'll never get signed